In the midst of all this water
In the lake of tears I cried
I sit here on my island
Trying nothing but to hide
From what’s falling down around me
And the ruins left inside
Constantly wishing, hoping, praying
That my pain will finally subside.
–
But as the sky around me darkens
And sun gives way to night
All I see is shadows crawling
Into spaces that had light
Before I came here to this island
Before I gave up on the fight
–
So now I sit here on my Isle of Tears
Alone and broken down
And all that there is left to do….
Is accept that I am stranded.
Well written with a good flow ! Loved it ! β€οΈβ¨
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Thanks so much!
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Hi,
Awesome thinking about that!.π
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Compliment is much appreciated, thanks!
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This is good ππππ
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This is the kingdom of isolation we all live in. This poem embodies the sadness of the heart that no one hears. This is what makes it blissful
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I love that that is what shines through for you, exactly what I’d hoped!
Thank you for the lovely comment π
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My pleasureπ
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Zoe, very well written and deep. Your poem invokes the emotions and hopelessness of isolation. Stay safe. Scott
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Thanks Scott!
And indeed – it’s a tulype of isolation we’re all rapidly becoming painfully familiar with, I fear. Strange times!
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I agree, bizarre.
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Gosh Yesterday
You Were Silly
It Made
Me Happy
Now All i Wanna
Do Is Give You
A Hug Like
A Lost
Kitten
Or
Puppy
In A Huge
Parking
Lot Of
Four Wheel
Drives At Walmart
(Yes i Spend Days
There But only
To Dance)
Why Is It
That Humans
Even βTrump Votersβ
Will Reach Out
To A Cat Or
Dog Lonely
Without A Home
Yet Tell A Homeless
Person To Find Their
Own Home
Alone
Starving
Americans
Yet The Church
i Go To Prays
To Keep
Trump
(A Real
F in Devil)
In Office
For Love
To Starve in
Every way
Even
Basic
Human
Freedoms
Like Whatever
Body Parts Desire
To Touch What
Or Just
F As
iβve Heard
You Sing Without
Fear Anyway
You Are
Human
i Donβt Hold it
Against You That
You Are not My
Pet And
By God If You
Were Suffering
Iβd Hope For
A Way Better
Than my Mother
Who Lasted 8 Days
Without any Food
Or Drop
Of Water
On Her Tongue
In Living Hell
*Facepalm* the
Most βHumaneβ
Way Offered
Naturally
For Her
To
Go
To Starve To
Death By God
i Do Believe We All
Deserve A Hug
Now How
Will
i Do That
In Words Thanks
All The Geeks
And Nerds
For
Emojiβs
That Trump All
Words Of Smaller Souls…
π€
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We girls get to have moodswings – right ππ€
BUT luckily…silliness is a good cure for moods like these!
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Hehe i’m Naturally A Rescuer (Empath)
oF All (IT Totally Destroys me
to See my Wife Ever Cry
Melting Melting me down)
Damsels in Distress But
True So Nice to Grow
MUCH Older As Some
‘Clever’ Women
Will Attempt
To Pick
At the
Pockets Yes SOULS
of Prince Charmings Real
Hehe even though i emptied
Out All ‘the Money’ into my Wife’s
Purse when i retired Just because
IT Weighs
Down
my
Pockets
To Freely
Dance in Clown Glee
Isn’t It True Though in So
Many Ways Life Will Weigh
Us Down Not Ever Allowing Sprees for
Us to Just take Flight in Silly Wings of
Free
Keep
All Your
Freak Flags
Silly Chin-Up my
Young Very Human
Blog Friend With Never
A Complication to Smile…
Or Mansplain Wisdom Yes
‘Dudes’ Will Naturally TRY to do too.;)
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This is how I’m feeling right now, thanks for sharing!
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Sorry to hear you’re feeling like this – but glad you liked it. Feel better soon ππ€
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Love this β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks! π³
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Really terrific piece Zoe! β€οΈ
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Thanks so much Cindy!
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You’re so welcome! πππ
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Just
…
(Speechless)
πΆ
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You should frame this
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Huge compliment!
Thanks π²π³π³
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Stranded, if so, feeling less so reading you…
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Lovely way of encouragement ππ
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I know the feeling
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I hope we could find our boat so we could journey again. I love it, the flow and the metaphorβ¨
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Beautifully done!
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π₯ but never give up! If there’s tomorrow, there’s hope.
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Dark, but beautiful.
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There is always a strange beauty in even our darkest moments ππ
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Loved it! Very well written β€
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Thank you so much π₯π₯°
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Really moving and brilliantly written.
βAll I see is shadows crawling
Into spaces that had lightβ.
I hope morning comes again soon and brings with it a glorious sunrise to brighten your day π
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Lovely compliment, thank you!
It brightens this morning for sure – even though the glorious sunrise was a drab grey mess over here π€
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As long as there was enough light to chase the shadows away π Itβs about to get dark here now, but thatβs OK, I love my long late nights.
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How beautiful! And sad… Hope you are okay? Good luck for the week ahead. π
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I am doing fine!
(Poem notwithstanding haha). Thanks for asking π
Have a great week!
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Wow Z!!! This was really awesome! Great Poetry!! Every line and stanza so filled with emotion and feelings so exquisitely described and expressed! A real joy to read!!! The only thing that could make it better – perfect would be to have you recite it on audio so can be relieved of having to read your words and instead can close our eyes and listen to your Voice as we visualize and imagine what we hear. I took a vote of all your followers and it was unanimous! Everyone wants to hear you reciting this poem!!! Please??? Your fans have spoken?? LOL Please?
Oh, and since all your followers Love and Care about you it would be so great if you could post your comment above – “I am doing fine!
(Poem notwithstanding haha). Thanks for asking π
Have a great week!”
as an author’s note at the end of the poem – as an update so we don’t worry!! π’π’ Please???
xoxox ππππΉ
Chuck
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Don’t Miss This Awesome Poem!!!
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This is heartbreaking but beautiful π€
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Glad you liked it!
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This poem is so relatable. Loved itπ
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Very very well written . Totally loved it
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Thank you kindly!!
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Wow
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Lovely words
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Glad you liked it :D!
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ππ
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Good poem. I like the use of assonance.
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